Rude - really nice imagery here. Opener kind of threw me off but more in a clever and unsuspected type of way. Very detailed and precise. Diverse content and was really digging the whole futuristic theme. It was a good topic to expand vocabulary and unique ideas on. Everything seemed well articulated and thoughtful.
Sammy-
More of a little generic of a topic. Shorter than I would of hoped. Basically was about grinding harder and being great but i suggest if someone is to use a more general and cliche topic, that they at least make the actual content exciting with some sort of depiction or complex style of writing within the piece to at the very least give it some spice or a hook if you will.. as a reader I didn’t sense that natural hook a topical should give me when I’m reading it.
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