Netcees - View Single Post - Habitat (5-3) vs. Sour Joog (3-0)

Mr. J · 02-12-2018, 02:14 AM

The intro & that atheist line from habitat was pretty cool tbh.
didnt really enjoy the rest of it though as a whole it lowered the value to me

overall I have sour winning this one for having the british cuisine & desolate line.
that opener was pretty cool too, your verse came across more concise in delivery.
habitats verse felt rushed but he did have a few lines in there.. just wasnt enough.
v/joog

02-12-2018, 02:14 AM	#15
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	The intro & that atheist line from habitat was pretty cool tbh. didnt really enjoy the rest of it though as a whole it lowered the value to me overall I have sour winning this one for having the british cuisine & desolate line. that opener was pretty cool too, your verse came across more concise in delivery. habitats verse felt rushed but he did have a few lines in there.. just wasnt enough. v/joog __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you Last edited by Mr. J; 02-12-2018 at 02:46 PM.