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Old 02-11-2018, 08:35 PM   #5
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'pupil dilation, iris diameter entropy wavelet
psychosomatic belly dive into the stasis
denim delight, dandelion prairie design
chewing on straw, crinkling grime grimacing smile'

The way you arrange your stream of thought by stringing words of quite different (at times even opposing) values together is highly intriguing. There's some beauty between the lines. I'm also quite fond of the few alliterations you employed, further elevating the read for me. 'Juniper fire' was fantastic as well.
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