13- opener was meh, camp trip was an okay idea could've been executed better, 3rd was lost on me, closer decent idea again, wording need work.
Bleak- opener idea okay, the end rhymes hurt it, crusading was okay, flip could of been stronger, 3rd didn't mean much to me not sure if it's me or you, this didn't mean much to me either.
Not a great battle. Both show potential though. Bleak last two bar hurt him here, as I can't see the play or angle. I'm over in England so I'm not sure if it's missing something or there just not being a lot there. 13 showing a little more progress on the concept side, but still need work on his execution. 3rd bar again was lost on me, you guys are gonna have to come a bit more universal if it's gonna translate to me. In the end I'm not really sure who wins here. I'm gonna give it 13 though because the last two of breaks were just complete misses for me. Vote 13
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