Infiltration did well but blatantly took my idea and did something different with it lol.
Unemployed seemed to be inspired by both mine and Inf's and came up with something between the two. That's how I read it at least. The "heated sex" lines wording was a little corny but the repeated beginning and end flip was very well done, verse was solid other than that.
Vulgar crushed this. Loved his verse. Nice subtle change of style, reminded me of old me somewhat I guess at the start.
Inf was very clean but his idea was too similar to what I did before it.
I didn't feel King Ra's as he's done the whole God thing very recently in memory in the AWOL but I ain't mad if he gets voted for it because some may not have seen that.
So I guess, Sammy was the best here for originality even if the flow wasn't the best and scheming at times was a little odd with some long ass lines. His take on the topic didn't really "fit" to me, but that aside it was well done. Vulgar had content and flow on point, and in topic. So he is near the top. Geno had flow but not the content the others had. Inf had a solid enough all round verse but came too similar to what I did and that put me off his verse somewhat to be honest. Unemployed flipped the topic well and had flow, no real hiccups aside from heated sex really so he is a strong contender.
I basically have it as Sammy, Vulgar and Unemployed. Out of the three I'd probably say Sammy and Unemployed did more I liked, and out of those two I'd probably say Sammy had a far better take on the topic but Unemployed did more with what was there and didn't rely on it too loosely to create something too far removed.
I liked both but I'm gonna give Un the nod here, purely personal preference as Sammy seemed to go on too far of a tangent for me to give it him here.
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