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Old 02-09-2018, 02:13 PM   #19
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fin there's nothin for anyone to grab onto here

your hook is like literally nothing and you fucked it up

the lyrics are simple and the vibe is slow as fuck which is fine but your delivery which is at 50% i hope would have been the only saving grace on a cell phone recording

what do you expect people here, especially here, to be impressed by

record it correctly and this song would be solid but really 'u faggots are bitches' aint no one gonna listen to that as a hook
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