There were some really dope verses I think Sammy's stood out the most for me, because he just took it in a completely different direction.
The theme of food, and using the picture to get there was brilliant. Also feel like there was a little bit of comparison of 'motherland' to mother earth - thus also keeping the picture tied into the theme. loved the soul food play on words. and this one :
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Originally Posted by Sammy
Fuck a spoon, finger food all day. We like to stay in touch.
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the finger/touch connection there was dope.
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Originally Posted by Sammy
light squeeze of lemon that life gave
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so V/Sammy
but some others I enjoyed :
Unemployed - Also outside the box and i like how you used the theme of being hollow to connect to the tree.
Infiltration -
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If I fall in the woods... only sounds heard are grinding teeth of a saw
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clean flow, and love the connection to the age old question "if a tree falls in the woods - does it make a sound?"
King Ra - loved the syntax and language and flow, your verse is probably the same tone/theme I would have went with.
Genocide - dope af imagery/flow. I liked all the different reasons you gave for ppl to dissect the tree for until it basically rots/falls or gets completely cut down.
Lars - was also completely outside of the box, and entertaining to boot.
MMLP - dope way to flip the anne frank angle.
Vulgar - the multis/flow was sick +rep for using Dhampir in the verse, definitely not something I expected to see on this topic.