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Old 02-08-2018, 05:58 PM   #7
Suthaveli
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easy, u a noob. cue the beating dude, its true
ima have Flo Peein' himself, then eating thru a tube
this was pretty gd

part of me's celtic, these hands are harming ye melon
every corner of ur face'll rise up so fast it could start a rebellion
lol. reminds me of a Resin type line. nice

got monsters w bullets the size of flying saucers to wet dude
terminator off his bike; that metal from the chopper will get u
meh. Mines was way better imo :)

my ride is dope, keyin this verse as i drive it home
i manage a Tesla cost...
U tes' Lacoste bottles when u cant buy cologne
this was nice swag & braggadocious. i like

wanna kno why strikta vanished? u aint landing jack shit
verse was so Ass,Strik didnt want one for advancing past it*
lol gd

u may have a few circle jerkers but ur best bar's questioned
ioutside the ring, shades given to this girl -bret hart's entrance
sigh. the bar was dope tho, but still..


respect barc's presence. in text, barc's legend
meanwhile UR hopes for Winterfell flat before ned stark lead it
nice

talm bout how he's dope n he'll be murdering here? relax ..
aint no1 helpin 'em sell that story or encouraging Realtor app
that's a no for me

bar verse was def dope. u can see where style & diff influences came from too. whether from last rd or whatevs. it was def a gd read tho.


vs


Im butch cassidy bitch, you a kid that needs to grow up
Cus if this sun dance, hes jus another of striktas kids beggin for him to show up
this had great potential, the execution was off on it. i def like where it was heading

Got scared N ducked Des, after this you be beggin to eat rounds
But fuck a Buck.. ill be Hookin this duck to win on Fair grounds
i like this.gd

Im treated second tier, call flo real silver an i wont frown
Cus if the gold Bar, its cus when the heat destroyer you have a meltdown
this was a bit off to me. but again, i saw strong promise there

Fuck a lars troll, if we talking regurjitating sick lines you still a culprit
Cus i find it reeaaal suspicious Barcotic only buys a KFC for the bucket
lol. cool

Fuck it, if i got the .50 barcotic standin shook
Ill drive by putting 4 rounds to your hood like an Audi would
simple. dope gun bar

I went to wolves city, netcee meet, all jaga bombs in a basement
Cus when i go to your city bars, im giving you shots til you lay out on the pavement
didn't work for me, bud.

Ill cut this vet bitch up for laughter, after ill leave you scattered in a park too
Leavin a thousand pieces of bark on the floor, now every kid grabbin bars gets the jumpon you
didn't like.


Ameteur vs a hall of famer, you were like royalty on this board till today
Cus the review can read - the 'rook he' beat the king as soon as he checked mate
no


Jay has some gd ideas. his simple bars are pretty much executed to perfection like the audi bar, i thought that was nice. he still needs to figure out what to stay away from in reference to being played tho. that will come w.time. the chess bar for ex. it was played & the word play seem a bit forced on it, so it made it a double no. but i def see improvement vs the last thing i recall reading from you, so def kudos to that.

mvgt- @Barcotic
he had a enjoyable verse put together, imo.
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