02-06-2018, 07:13 PM
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So both verses were eerily similar, both were about a witch like character or warlock type that gets captured in the end. This makes the voting easy for me cause it shows the differences clearly. Ra had the better more difficult rhyme patterns, though the multies slacked near the end. Syms ending sort of through me off because it ended with you talking about writing more. But that was the only time you mentioned a narrator of sorts. It kind of just through an extra loop at the end, an unnecessary loop at that. Those were literally The only two real glaring differences as the two verses, as I said, were so similar. For these reasons .I will add that you both did well as far as character bills up. You both explained why this thing was sought after and captured concisely.
Vote King ra
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