[2tripple0]

hmm I would have given this battle of the week in my opinion... I've read two of the other battles so far and I think this one both battlers really went in on the topic... I have to say this battle was very close and it really could have gone either way... the only thing I could take from it was I didn't really enjoy the topic that much in general the picture was just too I don't know not netcee if you feel me... it was too like sci fi style and I think both of you went in on it well for what it was... hmm im going look through it one more time before I give my kind of critique on it er whatever but here it goes...

okay for me the first dude symetrik seemed very forced to me although I enjoyed his writing and the first time I read the verse it did seem very fluid but looking at it again just at a glance er whatever I think there were parts where the wording was off maybe he was going for effect but for me it just seemed sloppy whereas the second dude just seemed to roll off the toungue... I also liked king ra's take on the subject matter it did seem like he knew what he was talking about which I cool I guess to a degree if the subject wasn't so corny... lol anyways he did alright I liked how he spinned the last verse back to the first that was cool made ya kind of think at the end... anyways this is what I took from this battle... I think the second verse was written a bit better and the first one was kind of all over the place it had no basic topic that it stuck to the entire time... just my opinion but yeah...

vote: king ra