*applause*
wow dude, that shit gave me chills towards the end, lol straight up,
excellent story telling skills and the way you incorporated
all three Main characters was ingenious..
first half of the first part was a liil choppy to me,
but I could tell the rhymescheme was a lil different
than an AA so it threw off the “text” flow to me..
also you know I like flawless multi schemes lol
which a few were off, but the overall content, imagery,
creativity, meaning and heart put into this trumps over
all lol solid read brother, keep it up! dont sleep yall
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