[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Barcotic

easy, u a noob. cue the beating dude, its true
ima have Flo Peein' himself, then eating thru a tube
Were you going for fallopian?
part of me's celtic, these hands are harming ye melon
every corner of ur face'll rise up so fast it could start a rebellion
OK
got monsters w bullets the size of flying saucers to wet dude
terminator off his bike; that metal from the chopper will get u
Decent
my ride is dope, keyin this verse as i drive it home
i manage a Tesla cost...
U tes' Lacoste bottles when u cant buy cologne
This is aight
wanna kno why strikta vanished? u aint landing jack shit
verse was so Ass,Strik didnt want one for advancing past it*
Creative
u may have a few circle jerkers but ur best bar's questioned
outside the ring, shades given to this girl -bret hart's entrance
Good concept
respect barc's presence. in text, barc's legend
meanwhile UR hopes for Winterfell flat before ned stark lead it
Cool
talm bout how he's dope n he'll be murdering here? relax ..
aint no1 helpin 'em sell that story or encouraging Realtor app
Ok

Originally Posted by Jay Welsh

Im butch cassidy bitch, you a kid that needs to grow up
Cus if this sun dance, hes jus another of striktas kids beggin for him to show up
Forced. Should have either focused on a Butch & Sundance concept or strika's dirt parenting, not both
Got scared N ducked Des, after this you be beggin to eat rounds
But fuck a Buck.. ill be Hookin this duck to win on Fair grounds
Decent
Im treated second tier, call flo real silver an i wont frown
Cus if the gold Bar, its cus when the heat destroyer you have a meltdown
Dope concept, bad wording
Fuck a lars troll, if we talking regurjitating sick lines you still a culprit
Cus i find it reeaaal suspicious Barcotic only buys a KFC for the bucket
Cool
Fuck it, if i got the .50 barcotic standin shook
Ill drive by putting 4 rounds to your hood like an Audi would
OK
I went to wolves city, netcee meet, all jaga bombs in a basement
Cus when i go to your city bars, im giving you shots til you lay out on the pavement
This is aight
Ill cut this vet bitch up for laughter, after ill leave you scattered in a park too
Leavin a thousand pieces of bark on the floor, now every kid grabbin bars gets the jump on you
Convoluted wording
Ameteur vs a hall of famer, you were like royalty on this board till today
Cus the review can read - the 'rook he' beat the king as soon as he checked mate
Naw, chess concepts are played

Read FloJay's verse a few times to make certain that I grasped what he was saying. Got to work on that wording, there were some very creative concepts that missed due to weak execution. Barc was consistent, had no standout haymakers, just an overall well put together verse..VOTE BARCOTIC.