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Pinot Grij · 02-02-2018, 01:02 PM

Joe -- Guess Who and Enterprise. Baio was a good try that cracked a smile, but still pretty dumb. appreciate the attempt though.

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Dynamicz - referencing a vague trade from 15 years ago that most people wouldn't get is a reach. Remember ya grace is weird wording. Joe Buttons is a good attempt but the execution was off, liked where your head is at tho. Dad bod is not really a punchline, but the rhyming was crispy. Overall, construction is solid, just gotta up ur content.

Vote -- Joe Boston

02-02-2018, 01:02 PM	#11
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Joe -- Guess Who and Enterprise. Baio was a good try that cracked a smile, but still pretty dumb. appreciate the attempt though. vs Dynamicz - referencing a vague trade from 15 years ago that most people wouldn't get is a reach. Remember ya grace is weird wording. Joe Buttons is a good attempt but the execution was off, liked where your head is at tho. Dad bod is not really a punchline, but the rhyming was crispy. Overall, construction is solid, just gotta up ur content. Vote -- Joe Boston __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.