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Old 01-30-2018, 10:52 PM   #10
Pinot Grij
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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Schad

Sacrilegious feels like a kind of old concept.
Mannequin line is dope -- the execution makes it deadly.
Witty line is aight.
Osprey not connecting for me.
Closer is cool.

Spree

Opener is too busy for my taste.
Krucial line is ok, but could've taken it further.
Odom is ok wp, but doesn't connect in the end for me.
Torture line is cool
Don't know anyone who knows what the fuck a sackbut is.

Yo Spree, I feel like you overcooked your shit cuz you knew you were up against stiff competition... so your verse felt pretty jumbled without a lot of natural flow. Schad's delivery was crispy as usual although I wasn't feeling all his attacks -- that mannequin line was textbook execution. there were a couple other hits that pushed me in his favor.

Vote -- Schadenfreude
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