Netcees - View Single Post - WRATH vs Barcotic

Pinot Grij · 01-30-2018, 10:31 PM

Barc

Opener dope
Stunner is dope punch but PRO Bone is a shit setup.
Oezdemir was lmao.
Limewire is cool concept but delivery was a bit fucked.
Not feeling Zoltan.
Kamloops is ok.
Seguin is a stretch and you know it.
Closer is aight.

Started really well -- then tapered out for a bit but the closer put things back on track.

WRATH

Opening line is fucking hilarious, punch left something to be desired.. not fierce wp.
Rigor mortis is a cool flip -- but mortem as wp was a stretch.
Crime scene is ok.
Illuminati ok.
Shots to the head is played.
URL is dope -- complete and effective. Nice. A punch that's been sitting under all our noses this whole time -- those are the best kind.
Luigi is ehh.
Closer is a throwaway.

WRATH had that one URL bar, but Barc was too polished. Both stretched wordplay a lot -- Barc's hits off the top were strong though -- WRATH could've made it closer with a stronger start off the hop.

Vote -- Barcotic

01-30-2018, 10:31 PM	#12
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Barc Opener dope Stunner is dope punch but PRO Bone is a shit setup. Oezdemir was lmao. Limewire is cool concept but delivery was a bit fucked. Not feeling Zoltan. Kamloops is ok. Seguin is a stretch and you know it. Closer is aight. Started really well -- then tapered out for a bit but the closer put things back on track. WRATH Opening line is fucking hilarious, punch left something to be desired.. not fierce wp. Rigor mortis is a cool flip -- but mortem as wp was a stretch. Crime scene is ok. Illuminati ok. Shots to the head is played. URL is dope -- complete and effective. Nice. A punch that's been sitting under all our noses this whole time -- those are the best kind. Luigi is ehh. Closer is a throwaway. WRATH had that one URL bar, but Barc was too polished. Both stretched wordplay a lot -- Barc's hits off the top were strong though -- WRATH could've made it closer with a stronger start off the hop. Vote -- Barcotic __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.