[uh-oh]

i want to clarify that i don't think its overbearingly blatant

i tried to put it with the mechanic metaphor, that its there if you know to look for it.

and i don't want it to seem like i think this or any of bw's work is terrible because of it. thats my only critique of his work from a rap mechanics standpoint

if i were to critique my own work i would pinpoint various things for example.

im just trying to point out what could be tightened up, but i don't know how to fix it. lol.