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Old 01-28-2018, 04:47 PM   #12
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This was a pretty dope battle, both came some with some slick lines, I really enjoyed both openers tbh.

But I felt that Nik took this. I really thought that Airplane Mode line was nice & on the right track. May have worked better if the first bar played into it better. But still dope.

I thought unfuck had a few dope lines to start but those last few hurt him pretty bad. The dollar, 50 cents and all that felt like a stretch that could have been worked out better & wit's respect made me think of Witty and not the battler here.
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