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Old 05-26-2013, 03:31 PM   #7
Mr. J
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I thought the beginning was pretty sick
you opened it very nicely and kept the flow going
I enjoy the style you used to, something I like using
regardless this was a loooong ass piece...nice drop though
keep writing my dude

This atom bomb has a meeting with a synagogue.
This is God. I do this thing with my mind where it tries to recreate. All the silence I’ve obtained.
Quickly dying out with pain. But ‘why so mindless, mate?
Align myself with hate. A mile? A mile today. I feel vile, violent rage

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I really liked this part to tell the truth
nice drop though my dude
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