ill- Coinstar and toll were nice. opener and closer were meh
13-As other have stated your concepts/plays are very dated and done. You really have something going like a personal to get away with them and certain ones like as above stated are just corny now. Its hard to know from site to site what been done before but if its some90's wordplay you should already know. Keeping grinding though you can form punchlines you got some mechanics down just need a bit more originality/creativity.
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