Netcees - View Single Post - Sour Joog vs. Unemployed

Pinot Grij · 01-26-2018, 01:21 PM

Joog

Opener light but cool
Doors line is hot.
Pepsi ad is fuckin' dope to me. Great imagery.
No problem line was choppy and lost its effect.
Chilla n Goodz line is dope -- thought I'd see more of this this week.. I wish it rhymed better, but the execution was cool.
Exit Wounds is cool

vs

Unemployed

Worm wp is stretched and not that effective.
Cum line is gross as shit but cool, I guess.
Pucker line is cool, I thought you could've taken it in a stronger direction tho.
I didn't know there was a poll, lol. Line is ok though.
Russia line is cool but feels a little out of date.
Crown line is aight too.

Good battle. Joog was solid. Unemployed was really good too but it almost seemed like the lines missed that little extra oomph and x-factor. That was the difference.. Joog just had a little more shine.

Vote -- Sour Joog

01-26-2018, 01:21 PM	#15
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Joog Opener light but cool Doors line is hot. Pepsi ad is fuckin' dope to me. Great imagery. No problem line was choppy and lost its effect. Chilla n Goodz line is dope -- thought I'd see more of this this week.. I wish it rhymed better, but the execution was cool. Exit Wounds is cool vs Unemployed Worm wp is stretched and not that effective. Cum line is gross as shit but cool, I guess. Pucker line is cool, I thought you could've taken it in a stronger direction tho. I didn't know there was a poll, lol. Line is ok though. Russia line is cool but feels a little out of date. Crown line is aight too. Good battle. Joog was solid. Unemployed was really good too but it almost seemed like the lines missed that little extra oomph and x-factor. That was the difference.. Joog just had a little more shine. Vote -- Sour Joog __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.