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Appreciate that, bro. I'm actually going to take your feed into consideration, because I've been getting that scheme comment quite a bit lately. Personally, I think the scheme is pretty complex, given the sheer amount of words, assonance, inners, vowel and constant sounds that actually rhyme. I think it just looks less obvious to the eye because the end rhymes aren't always compounded or line up in a predictable manner. However, if you read the verse under breath or aloud, you can more easily identify the technique. Not to say you didn't by any means. But, yeah, I'll definitely take what you said and apply it to a future piece. Thanks for the read, feed and insight . Give me some time and the favor will be returned.