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Old 01-26-2018, 01:26 AM   #8
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Fuck battle are you niggas reading?

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Originally Posted by Problumatic View Post
See, your TASK FOR WINNINGS BASIC, ya’ TACTICS WILL LIMIT GREATNESS/
ATTACKING FROM DISTANCE .. damn .. what a ‘PASSIVE INFILTRATION’/
'Passive' could have been dope had you developed the idea further
got the MASK THAT FITTED JASON, get ‘wrecked’ ‘OVER PASSIN’ LIMITATION /(overpass)
So he ‘skipping the next drive’ like a MADDEN SIMULATION/
Never explain lines within the verse, let alone something that simple. And Madden concepts been played since '96
Claiming this SOWN UP, but you couldn’t leave ‘AERO WINDED’/
Ya not ‘dynamic’ don’t ‘BOW UP’ cause’ AERO DID IT’/(Arrow)
Wow, bow & Aero plays are dead, even if not being use against Aero
Soon as this CHUMP CALLED it’s ‘border’ death, its ‘civil hatred’/
cause I don’t need TRUMPS WALLS just to END INFILTRATION/
Again you could have developed Trump's Wall into something great, but you left it simple as fuck
Get ya FLESH RIPPED WIDE like I’m a PETRIFIED ROTTY/
I don’t need FORENSIC FINDS, to IDENTIFY this BODY/
Nooooo, super played. And "BODY" is my signature, but Ion't put it in my verses..lol
Get ELECTRIFIED and ya INTESTINES FRIED PROBABLY/
you the type to ‘steal lines’ .. thats a TECH DEVICE ROBBERY/
*exhales deeply*
You a “King”? Nah a “Pawn” and tonight(KNIGHT) I might KICK IN HIS TOOTH/
His “Queen” get SLIPPED WIT the ‘ROOF’ like she was “BISHOP” IN JUICE/
Seriously how many times have you heard somebody use a Juice or chess concept? Combining them doesn't make them fresh/original concepts fool
I’m QUICK to INTRUDE, VICIOUS and I’m MISSIN’ A SCREW/
That’s why i’ll end his life chapter like RELIGIOUS DISPUTES/
NOW YOU HAVE ME YELLING! Wtf is the point of capitalizing the rhyming syllables?
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Originally Posted by Infiltration View Post
THOSE ODD LINES STRETCHED, & the agreement was NOT QUITE MET/
Trollin this nerd, thx for the verse.. but I aint went THAT far back in the ARCHIVES YET/
Lmao..good opener
P QUICKLY FAILS, begged to be ina newb tourney, lol I WISH EM WELL/
Die INA SPELL..& after you passport'll be what I give you on ya TRIP TO HELL/
Naaaw, should've just did the opener like that..lol
I'm on a mission.. draw a piece for ya set; that's a composition
100 round thompson bangin til ya skin on the drum, shit's a conga session
Nasty, ya know I luv these type bars
Ya bae? had it wit her pal...my boys sandwich'd at the house
Bitch was being dugout between two bodies longer than the panama canal
CRAZY!
We pissed on your slut, sticky as fuuuck, all over her ass
Since she had the mouth of a sailor we gave her a peacoat to match
Lmaoooo
Call it camp hazing fam, aim the can & you take flight son
For thinkin u an imaginary monster trustt this'll be no fake snipe hunt
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Dont believe in gun violence? u see mine & turn ghost, faggot
It's soo tragic how livin in black & white got u dying from achromatic.
Light
Influx in now Inf lucks out. dogg u show NO typa skill to me
Ya chances of winning is zero &&& chalk that up to low probability.
Decent
INFILTRATION even w/ Inf being sarcasm & bullshitting he took this comfortably. Problum you really need to update yo style & yo concepts & yo wording, that was some early 2000's ezboard, before I left grammar school shit. Just read the verse from everyone in the league's top 10 & study how dudes use the set-up/punchline formula, yet still all have different styles.
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