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Old 01-26-2018, 12:37 AM   #7
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Prob,.liked the way you used your multis mixed with the punch lines, and using word play also. The Trump line was cool, the passive line was nice too,.decent name.flips thru out.

Infiltrate...talking about g.f lines are old as fuck. The composition line was ok. Not much popping with multis or anything that really caught my eye.

Punch's- prob
Multis-prob
Word play-prob
Personals - n/a
VOTE=Prob. His verse was.actually.geared toward his opponent without generic lines that can be used on anyone.
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