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Pinot Grij · 01-25-2018, 08:09 PM

I think Classick took this pretty handily.

Hard decision and Slut shaming were stand outs. Nice flips. Alter egos is nice too.

Ego -- the opener was a little bit amusing and showed potential, but it went downhill from there. The imagery and construction was dope, but there wasn't a lot of payoff in terms of hard disses or punchlines. You're a good writer, this just isn't a very good *battle* verse.

Vote -- Classick

01-25-2018, 08:09 PM	#10
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	I think Classick took this pretty handily. Hard decision and Slut shaming were stand outs. Nice flips. Alter egos is nice too. Ego -- the opener was a little bit amusing and showed potential, but it went downhill from there. The imagery and construction was dope, but there wasn't a lot of payoff in terms of hard disses or punchlines. You're a good writer, this just isn't a very good battle verse. Vote -- Classick __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.