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Old 01-24-2018, 05:12 PM   #7
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This was actually a solid piece. Nice flow and horrorcore imagery. Couple bumpy spots in the rhyme scheme and some typos that I had to read over but regardless this was a solid written, did remind me a bit of my style.
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