Bit too short, felt last quarter you left that generic dark rap style an moved into a bit of a swag an flow theme, it sort of seemed to pick up in pace an then just ended which was a shame. HOWEVER I appreciate its a work in progress. Some ok stuff in there felt you could be darker an more creative in those earlier lines. Have a look at this peice i did ages ago which when i started reading yours i instantly felt a resembelance.
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...=Broken+minded