[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Sour joog

You cookin flames? nah that stuff you say just dug ya grave
Since you wanna dialysis.. I'll be cleaning up that blood for days
Seems familiar, plus you could've said bodily fluids instead of just blood
This ain't rb you ain't shit here, nothing changed it still remains a fact
Remember 'gainst Gillette, the man put the blade to ya face like a shaving add
I have no idea who Gill is..lol, but this is nice regardless
Gun in ya face, u aint even worthy to face the don
This Boy at the bottom of the barrel..same place Orc scraped him from
DOPE
Dude ain't got the appetite for this, he act up i'm cutting this clown
I take him trying to bulimia's a joke, that ends with his guts on the ground
Forced wp
I was bread for this, one punch this mans deaded quick
The force'll project that body so far it trashes that last Jedi shit
Clever
Finger on the trigger, shit it's a breeze to take this dude
If he here off his own accordion idiot, one squeeze will change that tune
Maybe if his name start w/ D - 'accord D an idiot'
You used to pack some weight, now you look down trodden and famished
Back then you used to throw down, this gauntlet don't even offer a challenge
Personal, but super light

Overall good verse, no major problems.