[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Krucial Th1rt3en

wen i kill u, youll dissapear into the night scene,
youll come up missing without a trace, Prince getting whiped clean.
Decent
u get a gun, ill grab a knife, lets see who got the best aim,
if Mr. misses, my scalpal give em a sex change.
OK nameplay
this guy probably cant scrap, and his whole pen game is subpar,
so if he say he greasey wit the hands, its bcuz he cant hang wit these bars.
Nope, played concept
30-38? damn, u shouldnt ever start no rap beefs,
u cant erase your terrible record, but u shouldve thrown out your rap sheets.
record/rap sheets, I know, u know that's an old concept
i hate trolls, so he better not ever let me see him around,
catch this Joker on a dark night witta Bat, beating this Clown.
Played against him
this boy gone need a doctor to check his heart,
Death by Quartering,
J will be separated into 4 corners like the Jack in a deck of cards.
Nice lol
twitter fingers, wit any beef i aint fuckin around,
all that hashtagging will have me out front wit the pound.
I used a hastag bar a while back, so it's played to Me
fire rounds,
dome shot, paint his head red, watch this clown die...
naw, Heath Ledger, now he can Die A clown.
Naw, there were a million Heath Ledger concepts after he died

I like your style, the way you deliver/word bars is dope, but those old ass concepts, got damn..smh. There's been countless battles, so u have to consider that a lot of stuff has been said a million times, so ya have to aim to be as original as possible, or else the impact your punches'll be nullified. And don't use those pointless ass lines to separate yo bars..lol.

Originally Posted by Mr. J

Boy my style is that Yeah Pie, yours is looking like Bukkake.
I stuff peaches & cherries, while there are layers to you getting frosted fruitcake
Fruit angle is a miss
pussy come get ya tubes laced or play the wall like a dental dam
ya whole future is spermicide from the occasional circle jerk sense of fam.
WHAT?
ya whole rhyme scheme is fucked & ya lines are wack as shit...we know.
truth is only time someone will call you commercial, is to show the benefits of cannabis on chemo.
Ok concept, but how does it relate to 13?
this toy will bring that talk to an end, so stop thinking you acting real.
one peep and Ill knock off that top with Ms & crack you open like a Happy Meal.
Decent
now get outta here kid, or you can see what this style does.
you dont have the connection to land lines you always getting tuned out like dial up
Oooooooollllddd asf
I could grab the tool & spark & leave this sucker heated like a blacksmith
problem is you used to getting led on, ya whole career is basically being catfished
This is actually decent

J you're still writing some weird stuff here & there..lol, but you're getting closer to the idea of punchline battling, still tho yo opponent had more to offer, KRUCIAL 13.