Netcees - View Single Post - Alvin Karpis vs For Battling

Pinot Grij · 01-20-2018, 10:03 AM

Alvin

That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite
Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life
lmaoaoao.

oaoaoaoaoaoa.

& you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off
No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash

great set up -- simple rhyming adds to a comical punch. dope.

The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit
I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick

Rhyming was dope, but I think the 'winter classic' holding it together lessened the impact.

vs.

For Battling

For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec
Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet

I'm getting sick of "arms" bars -- every battle got "arms" bars these days. Like how many scenarios can we dream up where ordinary folks are holding their arms out and we can relate it to a life-threatening GUN situation. Anyways, cool set-up tho.

I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around
Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound

Operation is dope.

Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak
So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be

Shell is ok.

Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools
Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule

I'm feeling the same way about ROUNDS as I do about ARMS. Like, how many round things have we talked about in general. It's a very common shape for everyday items.

I thought with Karp's slow start that FB could really capitalize, but I just don't respond to some of the wordplay, although the construction around it was tight. For me, Karpis had some of the funnier/hard lines that stuck out when all was said and done.

Vote -- Alvin Karpis

01-20-2018, 10:03 AM	#14
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Alvin That lip makes me cringe, I bet you get depressed when you bite Stop wonderin Wyclef isn’t gone till November, it’s with you the rest of your life lmaoaoao. oaoaoaoaoaoa. & you’re that soft, ya face make me laugh dawg so hats off No one will EVER share a drink with you.... quit blaming it on backwash great set up -- simple rhyming adds to a comical punch. dope. The fact is. it’s that’s sick, mr half lip aint jack shit I bet your idea of a winter classic is savin a ton on chapstick Rhyming was dope, but I think the 'winter classic' holding it together lessened the impact. vs. For Battling For yrs u were a ghost around the net. They told me Al was a soldier w/ the tec Bout time that we met, but these extended arms at ur door aren’t to welcome home a vet I'm getting sick of "arms" bars -- every battle got "arms" bars these days. Like how many scenarios can we dream up where ordinary folks are holding their arms out and we can relate it to a life-threatening GUN situation. Anyways, cool set-up tho. I’m a pro w/ the tools. Real quiet. He’ll swear that no1’s around Operation game, I’m removing every bone from this mans body w/o making a sound Operation is dope. Al’s past his prime, even started the league on a losing streak So why blast the 9? We’re already left w/ a shell of what you used to be Shell is ok. Told ur wife I have 1 rule. Do what I say or I’ll bust tools Either she hides it in her ass, or I’ll force rounds down her throat like a drug mule I'm feeling the same way about ROUNDS as I do about ARMS. Like, how many round things have we talked about in general. It's a very common shape for everyday items. I thought with Karp's slow start that FB could really capitalize, but I just don't respond to some of the wordplay, although the construction around it was tight. For me, Karpis had some of the funnier/hard lines that stuck out when all was said and done. Vote -- Alvin Karpis __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.