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Pinot Grij · 01-20-2018, 09:55 AM

Seems like some stretched wp -- some that worked, some that didn't

Bulimia line is pretty dope cuz I've never seen it before -- but I thought the dialysis and accordion shit was too much of a stretch, even though the 'squeeze' and 'change that tune' connected, I guess you just need to reword it.

I wish Letterman showed -- look forward to reading what you got next week.

01-20-2018, 09:55 AM	#11
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Seems like some stretched wp -- some that worked, some that didn't Bulimia line is pretty dope cuz I've never seen it before -- but I thought the dialysis and accordion shit was too much of a stretch, even though the 'squeeze' and 'change that tune' connected, I guess you just need to reword it. I wish Letterman showed -- look forward to reading what you got next week. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.