Hi...
you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
i like this. Thought it was creative.
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
This was nice too.
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
This was dope.
I dont recall any of Killing Spree's verses but this probably wouldve been a good battle. That closer wasnt good tho. I like your wording. I read your stuff all the time. I dont think you need harshness. I think you need consistency. Dont just throw any line out there to make the line limit.
Bye...
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Orc | ill nik-A | Sn00p | King Karaoke
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