Hi...
Claimin his mans is outrageous til I stain his homie;
He says a lad inside, he's over covers w/ his face shocked - David Bowie,
*crackle crack* thats the sound of Bones snappin,
I'm breaking Habits...guess my only Resolution this New Years is Graphic!,
Orc.. what's with this matching placement,
Can't believe I progressed thru last week & that fast I’m back to Basics...
David Bowie line was slick and that basic line was fire...
wish you worded your whole verse like those lines...
wasnt really feeling the closer and everything else was ok...
i'd almosttt feel bad killing you slow, cuz the fact is ur delicate
the chromite end ur physical existence.. either way you'll be back in your element
always losing to bottom tier faggots n u just can't get quoted
u couldn't drop heat in a versifier engulfed the hand that wrote it
the chromite line was fire and the versifier line was cool but the rest of your verse didnt really do much. The opener was too simple for me and the wordplay was forced in the closer.
Close battle regardless.
Vote-Unfuk.
Bye...
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Orc | ill nik-A | Sn00p | King Karaoke
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