Bleak, thought ur closer was your best imo..
I didnt feel the angles you used to compliment
Maybe should've done a pic diss. You had some concepts like NSFW but i didnt like the wording here.
Swerve, nika backpack, mile high, had a cpl of aight lines. your material was more relatable to me. Although you had a cpl corny lines near the end still got it handily.
Vote Swerve.
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