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Originally Posted by Orc
Another zinger from a skinny fat lesbian haircut having weirdo
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Hmm, to start off with.. pick either skinny or fat it'll give your line more of a direct focus. There's a lack of personal connection since you don't even know where you're starting, nevermind understanding where to go afterwards. Send it to Hush though next, see if he can help you more with it..
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