I’m prettier than Zack Morris at The Max sportin’ his dad’s cordless
If they offered swag courses, it’d just be mad portraits of the kid, I’m THAT gorgeous
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v/Pinot
Disappointed as i expected a better read, especially from you orc your whole verse was very choppy. I kinda dug the flow on the opener but then you said 'block sparsely' and rhymed that with bloc party. You were also rhyming stuff like jay-den smith with flay-grant of kids and pul-itz-er with spritz-er.
It would need to be something like "Your flagrant kid, you wear lady shit like jaden smith" and only really works on a slant rhyme anyway.
Pinot started off real strong, that could be one of the openers i've enjoyed most in a swag and flow verse.. Flow stayed on point after that but the swag dropped off a little but did enough.
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