[Inno]

razah
I like short pieces a lot.
after "slightest wind" it fell off a bit for me, I couldn't find the connection for "fallen ash" it seemed out of place.
the "had a bright future... / ... light flicker" was cool, the ending wasn't bad but didn't feel super solid to me.

innovator
STEAK?!
"passerby, only by chance kinda guy" was really dope.
it was a cool piece, some of it seemed sloppy (to my tastes) like the concert plot thing.
and the ending was aight but "whimsical whim" -.-

mr. j
i'm gonna just not read the last part cuz i ain't figuring out how to tie it together lmao
however, the first section was solid as fuck. this is absolutely the best I've seen from you this season, and those two fucking tiny little hint/ties to the sickness were beautiful. you did a great transition of time, a great veerrrrry vague touch back on the cancer. dunno this was just dope. I had no idea how to connect the second part of it but the first part alone is enough.

mvgt mr j