01-16-2018, 05:16 PM
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mvgt ra so...
ra had a good piece, it's a little spacey/godly but it kept that the entire way through which is too their credit, it didn't go beyond its scene which was cool.
the "spirit lifts then fades... in" part had a really good pause/feel to it. didn't like the play on "energy" just cuz it felt more material than an ascended consciousness. it was a good read though.
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