[Mr. J]

Ender, I enjoyed your verse but it felt kind off at certain points.
I dont know if its the packaging of the rhymes or what but I rode with it.
your story begins to take shape after that mini introduction which I liked.
it felt like the calm before the storm & you really made some strides to the end.
although I thought the piece could have used some stronger source material.
I can see how the topic blends in once we get to the end and I enjoyed it.
you stumbled at the end with that sheep meeting a shark line in my opinion.
the whole scenario just seemed flung out of place to make its mark...
I understand what you were trying to convey but it just didnt come off smooth.
Im willing to admit that your flow is pretty great though, I enjoyed that bounciness you brought.
if anything Im excited to see what else you can bring to the table here...

King, Good to see an old face pop in to compete and drop a dope verse.
the edge still seems there and you didnt really need to warm up to this drop.
whenever I see topics like this its always nice to see what word choices folks bring.
I dig the whole vibe of this piece though especially due to awe struck/construct
definitely a solid piece from you during your hiatus...

v/I was leaning towards Ender at first due to the bulk of his overall piece.
but there were a few parts that I found myself disliking it just didnt hit me as hard as Id hoped.
the topic just needs some umph to keep my attention & that is what Ra brought to the table.
I like the whole point he brought with his piece and I thought he really shined through.
the flow was more poetic to me but it still carried that strong presence that makes you say whoa...
very well done...nice battle fellas, this should be a close one