Netcees - View Single Post - Basic M vs Unfukwitable

Pinot Grij · 01-14-2018, 02:07 PM

Basic

Opener is basic flip but rhyme construction is top notch. Well written.
Dark video bars -- I've seen several variations over the past couple weeks.
Hated member is a personal diss, but I don't get the wp if there is any.
Amityville bar is hard.
Mark Henry bar is cool.
Closer is deece.

Unfuk

Opener is cool concept -- could've been executed a lot more effectively, imo.
Smack is ok.
Gym Playlist is cool.
Blood missin is cool imagery but no wp.
Chores line is cool concept but execution lacked.
Closer is lol. Probably the best line in the battle.

This is pretty close -- I feel like one really killer line on one side or the other could've put it out of reach. As is, I think Unfuk was dealing with better concepts, although I think stumbled a bit in execution. I give it to Unfukwitable. Fun battle, dudes.

01-14-2018, 02:07 PM	#13
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Basic Opener is basic flip but rhyme construction is top notch. Well written. Dark video bars -- I've seen several variations over the past couple weeks. Hated member is a personal diss, but I don't get the wp if there is any. Amityville bar is hard. Mark Henry bar is cool. Closer is deece. Unfuk Opener is cool concept -- could've been executed a lot more effectively, imo. Smack is ok. Gym Playlist is cool. Blood missin is cool imagery but no wp. Chores line is cool concept but execution lacked. Closer is lol. Probably the best line in the battle. This is pretty close -- I feel like one really killer line on one side or the other could've put it out of reach. As is, I think Unfuk was dealing with better concepts, although I think stumbled a bit in execution. I give it to Unfukwitable. Fun battle, dudes. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.