Netcees - View Single Post - Swerve vs Alvin Karpis

Pinot Grij · 01-13-2018, 07:50 PM

Swerve -- great verse -- only things I wasn't feeling was the peace pipe line and the Avengers line -- everything else had a good creative twist to it. Trident and opener were cool. Dis Kar did was cool too.

Karp -- opener is ehh. NSFW is ehh. Can opener is dope. Bay leaves not feeling. I like the Oregon concept but felt execution could've been harsher. Somalian was cool, "truest square" is a weird set up. Also, I just hate gay sex imagery in battles.

This is closer than the voting has gone.. I honestly don't know how to call it. In no way was this a runaway victory one way or the other. Swerve had opener, trident and discarded.. Karp had Can Opener and Somalian. Again, I hate bars about dudes having sex with each other, so that's a black mark on that line for me. I'ma give it to Swerve.

01-13-2018, 07:50 PM	#12
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Swerve -- great verse -- only things I wasn't feeling was the peace pipe line and the Avengers line -- everything else had a good creative twist to it. Trident and opener were cool. Dis Kar did was cool too. Karp -- opener is ehh. NSFW is ehh. Can opener is dope. Bay leaves not feeling. I like the Oregon concept but felt execution could've been harsher. Somalian was cool, "truest square" is a weird set up. Also, I just hate gay sex imagery in battles. This is closer than the voting has gone.. I honestly don't know how to call it. In no way was this a runaway victory one way or the other. Swerve had opener, trident and discarded.. Karp had Can Opener and Somalian. Again, I hate bars about dudes having sex with each other, so that's a black mark on that line for me. I'ma give it to Swerve. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.