01-13-2018, 07:33 AM
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#8
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Senior Member
Join Date: Dec 2017
Posts: 118
Battle Record: 5-12
Rep Power: 247411
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Flo Real
I got that mafia feel, industrial microwaves are a weapon for real
Wrap your face in celephane stabbed several times like your one of its meals
Simile bars need to be really clever for them to work for me, and this one was worded strangely. Wasn't feeling this
Youll find me in bars when its dark, i set the fuckin town alight while..
if infiltrates got bars on fire at knight, its only after he bit his creative style
Again, the wording is really strange here. Also, bars about people stealing other people's style or punches are too common to have much impact without great wording or some recent drama
Daydreamin hes a G with the stacks, hidin behind a screen with a frown
But bet your 'Crip to currency' bubble pops if the internet connection went down
There was a good concept here but poor execution
Got you over the barrel beatin your ass to death with ya own vest
Bitch the rock salt on the wound aint to dissolve the slugs layin in your chest
Interesting concept, execution was off
Can see the nameflips b4 you say them, im the FBI for battling kid
The way i expose 'bars' one hit ill have you swaying quicker then he did
The wording was off and made the punch weak
You used to be someone here, now your shook, a bitch with no lines of late
If you ever get a hold of bars again, i suspect its the prison showers as your viciously gang raped
Not feeling this
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Infiltration
I've battled many lost souls who nevaa grasped the light.
Death's a process. I'm helpin Flo Chart his steps towards the afterlife./
Nice
Peeped you on site. That bullll u throw up's offf guy.
Infield you out & saw those lines were easyy to catch like a Pop Fly./
Didn't seem particularly harsh
Nobody buys ur made-up stories, they need to quit.
Cuz everything Real Estate in his posts prove he's Trulia piece of shit./
Nice wordplay here
U & ya mans have a new deal when yah'll try anal sexin.
Feel down? He'll put the D between FR to ease the Great Depression./
Solid wordplay again
Moms the freakiest hoe that slore loooves piss in her vag.
My dogs house trained, do their Business Insider or get hit w/the mag./
Wasn't feeling this. The wordplay was good but the concept seemed weak
KNOW I'm savage. Ur sign ins useless like that Ronin faggot.
Said u'd 'make it a Classic'... noww we'll need an explanation for that wack shit./
Passable
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Infiltration had good wording and wordplay throughout and some decent concepts. Flo Real had some good concepts as well but his wording destroyed his punches and made them all fairly weak.
Vote - Infiltration
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