Definitely your best drop, much better and easier when it comes to reading, flowed well...some of the slant rhymes were questionable and the wording was slightly awkward at times, but this is definitely a step forward, solid little piece for the most part.
I'd like to see you write to a topic, but if that isn't your thing then its all good. Keep writing man.
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Explicit and poisonous violent crime.
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