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symetrik, your feed made me laugh in a good way. I've played around quite a bit with poetry, written a couple sonnettes and a few other set form poetry pieces to post on poetry forums to see how they're received and/or if I could make the transition, and to see how it all strings together in that world of writing. Pretty cool that you picked up on it, lol. I feel like you're definitely on point with the criticism as well.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
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