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ender
tbh I have a hella hard time with political pieces, so you gotta pull it back dope for me, sorry man. I see a bunch of quotes from trump, some "shit's going bad and he's a child" stuff. for what it was, it was okay, but I wish it had tied into the topic a lot more (sure, russian scandal etc. etc.).
dope line:

though maybe drop "my"? dunno. the flow in my head skipped it.
the last line was good too.
dunno, I just can't get into this type of verse, but it wasn't horrible.

mr j
I like being vague but sometimes your vagueness is verging on too poetic (not a bad thing, I'm down with it), but I do think it loses people when your opponent has a clearly structured verse and sticks to a non-vague topic.
anyways, let's see.
dope lines:

maybe the jester was a tie back to you but I didn't make the connection.
none-the-less, this line was cool to me.

just that single line was dope, the rest around it feels like it's... about smoking?
dunno, that line had a lot of potential to be expanded into something more topically definite
I liked the use of "picture that..." but the sort of vagueness (to me) came back hard.

all in all, the topic for ender was much more obvious and well defined.
at the moment, though, I'm feeling the poetics and that "paint ya portrait" line, so
mvgt mr j