[Inno]

Symetrik - Dope picture to go by. Pretty abstract piece and I enjoy that. Short, sweet and interesting with dope imagery. However, since it is pretty short I found the sentences starting with ''the'' a bit much with 5 sentences in a row starting like that, I didn't like the reptition of that at all tbh. Beside of that I enjoyed your take on it really well, the last 5 lines really wraps your piece and transitions to its closing in a natural fashion. Good shit.

Innovator - Your first paragraph is dope af, great visuals and imagery to recreate the image in my head as I'm reading it. It reads well for the most part but can't really make ''above me'' and ''heavy'' work for me or a transition in the next line to help it out. Second paragraph is dope as well but I didn't like the last couplet at all, couldn't make ''physique'' and ''inside me'' really flow or rhyme that well when I read it out loud but you stay true to the theme of your piece so that's a plus. Really like the way you're driving your piece towards the closure here, it wraps it up really well with the character in your piece having a moment of clarity and sees the world of reality for (perhaps) the first time. All in all it had a couple of hiccups but no biggie, pretty dope take on the picture and I enjoyed it quite a bit.

MVGT Innovator. They both had hiccups in their pieces but with a bit more polishing both of these could have been a little bit better but it's still a pretty dope battle and showing from both. Still tho, Innovator takes it on home. Felt both had an equally abstract and cool concept but the execution of the piece itself is where Inno is superior imo and that's why he snatches my vote. Pretty cool battle, keep it up y'all!