This had a really beautiful flow. I recognised a few names from this forum in your piece, but since I'm brand new here I didn't really get any of the references. From your link, and those names, I feel like this piece is probably about spending too much time on this site and having your world shrink down into text and online drama. Which I think is an interesting idea. Of course, it could easily not be about that as well, since I feel like a stranger looking in through a window with this verse!
Either way, very well written with excellent mechanics.
Nice work!
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