[bleak]

Pretty sure this is a KO alrdy but I need votes.

Allen posted some usual shit that got him over. Hab just needs to be more at the throat. It comes off a bit soft when it reads like:

"This is what's gonna happen, because this is what you did."
Or
"When you do this, this is what's gonna happen."

The landslide shit was the exception to this and hopefully you can see what I mean because it's hard to put into words. It just makes it sting less when you're walking the reader thru every bar.

Allen, this was good. I like wrestling bars but HATED the ladder match line. It just seems so old and played. And if not played then boring and uncreative. Besides that tho, good shit

AK