Netcees - View Single Post - Kirk Clapplin vs Plot

ill nik-A · 01-06-2018, 06:33 AM

Kirk had the better verse. Some of the wordplay was good but I feel u need to attack ur opponent more. Still solid. Plot, I don’t know man, the button line is just weird. RC Line was too. i Think what hurts u is the construction of the punch. Feels like u write ur set-ups and adopt ur punch to it for rhyming sake

Kirk wins

01-06-2018, 06:33 AM	#11
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	Kirk had the better verse. Some of the wordplay was good but I feel u need to attack ur opponent more. Still solid. Plot, I don’t know man, the button line is just weird. RC Line was too. i Think what hurts u is the construction of the punch. Feels like u write ur set-ups and adopt ur punch to it for rhyming sake Kirk wins __________________ Grumpy old man.