Netcees - View Single Post - Schadenfreude vs Unfukwitable

Pinot Grij · 01-05-2018, 07:08 PM

Unfuk -- turtles line is funny af. Hush puppies is deece. Closer is really cool too.

Schad -- table legs is a good attempt to get around played out personals, not sure it hit the hardest though but appreciate the originality. Fuk buddies is good. There was a lot of serious reaches in the middle... you admitted lacking inspiration in this one and it kinda showed -- the smack 5 was a good punch line, but the set up was reaching. Anyways, know this is far from your best showing.

Vote -- Unfukwitable

01-05-2018, 07:08 PM	#11
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Unfuk -- turtles line is funny af. Hush puppies is deece. Closer is really cool too. Schad -- table legs is a good attempt to get around played out personals, not sure it hit the hardest though but appreciate the originality. Fuk buddies is good. There was a lot of serious reaches in the middle... you admitted lacking inspiration in this one and it kinda showed -- the smack 5 was a good punch line, but the set up was reaching. Anyways, know this is far from your best showing. Vote -- Unfukwitable __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.