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Old 01-05-2018, 02:01 AM   #13
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u way too gentle to duff me, type feeble n still a whelp
i honestly don't sensei threat from u, go find 1 that'll teach u to kill urself

Played

dubbed urself classick huh?, it's radical n seems legit
ur screen name bout creative as every unoriginal faggot who thinks of it

Ok

blam steel or keep it text g?, bang ur gone w/ a smirk
get caught up if u mess w/ da strap, the same way ankle monitors work

Fire

leave u in serious condition, i'm lit as neighbor battles
clap the metal to give ur chest a jolt, u'll need some defibrillator paddles

Ummm nice

otbva won't hustle me none, voters ain't retarded here
bump any opinion this fleecer render, plz do both ur fucking garbage tier

Dope!

ur wp's ain't nicer than mine, that amount to no stress
cuz u force demonstrate up reach b, enough to rally a thousand protests

Nice


Im here to raise the bar this is ‘pen lifintg’ ,and its quite ‘cursive’ /
Put a SPELL on u , they gon C 2 O’s and a L at the end , cool sound like a nice person /

Cool but to much going on here

U SWEAR u BLACKIN on which craft? (witchcraft) u must like CURSING /
Put ‘pressure on his flow’ , the ‘pipe burstin’ , sun (son) better shed light in this room or its night curtains/

Ehh

Name yaself after Brock Lesnar ? The fake SHOWS ! im in the scratch the SERIAL off this mac stage/
But This aint BL SERIES , plus how u gon fight Broke n every one a ya 'smack staged' ?/

Ur trying to do to much

Im SUITED for war , its in my genes (JEANS) to sneak a (SNEAKER) ‘loaded cal’ thats what I tucks (TUX) in it/
Whoever SLACKS getting aDRESSED with clips, my CLOTH got more layers den a lux gimmick/
Same as above

I hope C aware ( a wear ) cuz a pair’ll (apparel) KICK from the BLAZER and send CAPS flyin
This (k)not a TIE , gats firing ! Nigga I spazz on the REAL like mack myron/
Show me who the best! I can troll (control) champions , cuz when i BLAC it hurts..like how can he (kenny) do this?/
Trust ! It will be trays (betrays) to pop , for thinking fakin' a count(account) I let it FLY on sight/site like Kenny Lewis
TIME !!


Just gonna leave it there, broke took this with some dope stuff, classik u just gotta tone it down man there's to much going on that it's taking away from the impact. Just clean it up n make it smoother.. that verse was an eyesore there's no need for all the extras..anyway broke got this
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